progress shot

A bit of progress on her today, any crits/thoughts? I am noticing right away that she appears rather muted and desaturated in this jpeg as compared to the photoshop file. I am trying not to go too dark or contrasty with this piece - I would ideally like to hit some kind of inner luminous quality. I was also concerned about the pose not being graceful, that instead of a slight lean forward I was getting and hunch back or sort of broken neck situation.